Sunday 6 November 2011

More exciting writing


More of the writing we have done with exciting beginnings to hook you into reading them.
Run, Run, Go, Go! Today we did sprints. I won! I love sprints.
Tayla
“On your marks, Get Set, Go!” went Mrs Majury. People ran as fast as they could. I was about to be the winner but people just came past me.
by Stephanie
Zing, Zing, Zing. People going past me. So who cares. It is just a race.
by Jordan.
In a taxi we go. “The Airport!” I say. We go on the plane. It flies for a long time. When we are taking off we get lollies. We are going to Australia!
by Daniel
Scream! Scream! I am getting dizzy. Spew! Spew! I am getting sick. I want to stop now!
by Jade

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